In this post I have detailed the feedback I have been given when I presented the first draft of the initial stages of my film:
1) Take out the ellipsis in the opening production companies, as this isn't something that normally happens in feature films and is not a convention.
2) There are parts of the film that are jumpy, which need to be sorted.
3) The gap between the introduction definition and the opening scene is too long.
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