Tuesday, 10 February 2015

Ancillary Task 1: Rough Draft Feedback

I have recently shown my rough draft of my film poster to my class. They came back with a number of feedback points, things that worked well and things that I could add to make the final product good. These things included:

  • Perhaps a more interesting title, although the lower case disconnect works well, I could play around with some of the letters to link it to technology. For example, rotating the S 180 degrees, to make it look like some sort of computer cable.
  • Think of an effective tag line to go with my film poster and position it underneath the title.
  • For the image on the poster, technology is obviously the centre focus. To portray this it was suggested that no actors would be in the image, just a mobile phone. I could also take an over the shoulder shot of someone on a computer using a social networking site. Lastly an image that portrays the message in the film, it was suggested that I could include an image of my main actor looking miserable using this technology, perhaps in a secluded setting to represent this idea of loneliness  and isolation that my film portrays.

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