Audience Research: Pitch & Feedback Video

This is video of the proposed pitch, containing details such as; the working title, camerawork ideas and the narrative.

 

Some of the points made in my feedback video included things such as story line and plot changes. I will take some of these points into account, as so far I have come up with a scene by scene plot, based on some of the suggestions from my audience research. This feedback has helped me greatly, as not only did my audience help me with a few ideas, but I have been motivated to start really planning my film.